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Long nights are spent thinking about you. How I want you, how I need you by my side. The sound of your voice soothing my soul, your gentle hands comforting my body. You are my calm, my everlasting peace.

Often I wonder if you feel the same, if you say my name with the same passionate flame as I do yours. If every word spoken reminds you of me, if your eyes confuse my image with everything upon which they lay sight on.

Virtually trembling with excitement I study the image of your body that has been lingering in my head. Wishing your body was tightly embraced around my own. The warmth of your body against mine eradicating the coldness that once resided within me.

Everything starts to fade away as you invade the entirety of my being. My lungs become consumed with greed as my heart's symphony starts to play louder and quicken it's pace. My body goes into red alert as earthquakes of pure excitement shake it down to it's very foundations. The light is momentarily banned from my eyes .Within this new darkness everything becomes clear again as my feelings of lust for you are expelled from within and into the world for all to witness. Serenity sets in afterwards, and the purest smile is formed upon my face, for I know that this is love!
©2008-2009 ~Cris-M
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Well, I felt inspired today after so long to write poetry. Once again is a little sappy love poem...

And Yea...L O V E is what it spells out. :D

I hope "E" is ok, It's explaining a little something that starts with an "O" and ends with an "asm" looool

(Ps. Forgive any gramatical errors, I wrote this poem the way I would speak it (the commas are pauses that I would make when I would read it) :D)
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woah there... this is deep. really beautiful!
Thank you , glad you like it :D

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OMG! this is so good O.O I really like it ^^
Thanks a lot, Im happy to see someone enjoying my poetry:D

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I had read it again ^^ and add it to fav :love: i guess i forgot the first time :blush: lol :XD:
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